https://wiki.ekatrafoundation.org/index.php?action=history&feed=atom&title=%E0%AA%85%E0%AA%B0%E0%AB%8D%E0%AA%B5%E0%AA%BE%E0%AA%9A%E0%AB%80%E0%AA%A8_%E0%AA%97%E0%AB%81%E0%AA%9C%E0%AA%B0%E0%AA%BE%E0%AA%A4%E0%AB%80_%E0%AA%95%E0%AA%BE%E0%AA%B5%E0%AB%8D%E0%AA%AF%E0%AA%B8%E0%AA%82%E0%AA%AA%E0%AA%A6%E0%AA%BE%2F%E0%AA%95%E0%AA%AE%E0%AA%B2_%E0%AA%B5%E0%AB%8B%E0%AA%B0%E0%AA%BE%2F%E0%AA%B8%E0%AA%A6%E0%AB%8D_%E0%AA%97%E0%AA%A4_%E0%AA%AA%E0%AA%BF%E0%AA%A4%E0%AA%BE_%E0%AA%AE%E0%AA%BE%E0%AA%9F%E0%AB%87 અર્વાચીન ગુજરાતી કાવ્યસંપદા/કમલ વોરા/સદ્ ગત પિતા માટે - Revision history 2026-07-22T12:50:42Z Revision history for this page on the wiki MediaWiki 1.45.0 https://wiki.ekatrafoundation.org/index.php?title=%E0%AA%85%E0%AA%B0%E0%AB%8D%E0%AA%B5%E0%AA%BE%E0%AA%9A%E0%AB%80%E0%AA%A8_%E0%AA%97%E0%AB%81%E0%AA%9C%E0%AA%B0%E0%AA%BE%E0%AA%A4%E0%AB%80_%E0%AA%95%E0%AA%BE%E0%AA%B5%E0%AB%8D%E0%AA%AF%E0%AA%B8%E0%AA%82%E0%AA%AA%E0%AA%A6%E0%AA%BE/%E0%AA%95%E0%AA%AE%E0%AA%B2_%E0%AA%B5%E0%AB%8B%E0%AA%B0%E0%AA%BE/%E0%AA%B8%E0%AA%A6%E0%AB%8D_%E0%AA%97%E0%AA%A4_%E0%AA%AA%E0%AA%BF%E0%AA%A4%E0%AA%BE_%E0%AA%AE%E0%AA%BE%E0%AA%9F%E0%AB%87&diff=20624&oldid=prev KhyatiJoshi at 10:21, 28 October 2021 2021-10-28T10:21:17Z <p></p> <table style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122;" data-mw="interface"> <col class="diff-marker" /> <col class="diff-content" /> <col class="diff-marker" /> <col class="diff-content" /> <tr class="diff-title" lang="en"> <td colspan="2" style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122; text-align: center;">← Older revision</td> <td colspan="2" style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122; text-align: center;">Revision as of 10:21, 28 October 2021</td> </tr><tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno" id="mw-diff-left-l116">Line 116:</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">Line 116:</td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>{{Poem2Close}}</div></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>{{Poem2Close}}</div></td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</div></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; 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font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">|next =સ્વપ્નમાં</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">}}</ins></div></td></tr> </table> KhyatiJoshi https://wiki.ekatrafoundation.org/index.php?title=%E0%AA%85%E0%AA%B0%E0%AB%8D%E0%AA%B5%E0%AA%BE%E0%AA%9A%E0%AB%80%E0%AA%A8_%E0%AA%97%E0%AB%81%E0%AA%9C%E0%AA%B0%E0%AA%BE%E0%AA%A4%E0%AB%80_%E0%AA%95%E0%AA%BE%E0%AA%B5%E0%AB%8D%E0%AA%AF%E0%AA%B8%E0%AA%82%E0%AA%AA%E0%AA%A6%E0%AA%BE/%E0%AA%95%E0%AA%AE%E0%AA%B2_%E0%AA%B5%E0%AB%8B%E0%AA%B0%E0%AA%BE/%E0%AA%B8%E0%AA%A6%E0%AB%8D_%E0%AA%97%E0%AA%A4_%E0%AA%AA%E0%AA%BF%E0%AA%A4%E0%AA%BE_%E0%AA%AE%E0%AA%BE%E0%AA%9F%E0%AB%87&diff=18754&oldid=prev Atulraval at 00:44, 17 October 2021 2021-10-17T00:44:30Z <p></p> <table style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122;" data-mw="interface"> <col class="diff-marker" /> <col class="diff-content" /> <col class="diff-marker" /> <col class="diff-content" /> <tr class="diff-title" lang="en"> <td colspan="2" style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122; text-align: center;">← Older revision</td> <td colspan="2" style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122; text-align: center;">Revision as of 00:44, 17 October 2021</td> </tr><tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno" id="mw-diff-left-l7">Line 7:</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">Line 7:</td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>ને એકાએક સોપો પડી ગયો</div></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>ને એકાએક સોપો પડી ગયો</div></td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>કોઈ એક ક્ષણે</div></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>કોઈ એક ક્ષણે</div></td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="−"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #ffe49c; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>સરી ગયા તમે ક્ષણ <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">સો ંસ ર વ ા</del></div></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>સરી ગયા તમે ક્ષણ <ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">સોંસરવા</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>ક્ષણ પછી ક્ષણ પછી ક્ષણ</div></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>ક્ષણ પછી ક્ષણ પછી ક્ષણ</div></td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>પછી પછી ક્ષણરહિત સમયમાં</div></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>પછી પછી ક્ષણરહિત સમયમાં</div></td></tr> </table> Atulraval https://wiki.ekatrafoundation.org/index.php?title=%E0%AA%85%E0%AA%B0%E0%AB%8D%E0%AA%B5%E0%AA%BE%E0%AA%9A%E0%AB%80%E0%AA%A8_%E0%AA%97%E0%AB%81%E0%AA%9C%E0%AA%B0%E0%AA%BE%E0%AA%A4%E0%AB%80_%E0%AA%95%E0%AA%BE%E0%AA%B5%E0%AB%8D%E0%AA%AF%E0%AA%B8%E0%AA%82%E0%AA%AA%E0%AA%A6%E0%AA%BE/%E0%AA%95%E0%AA%AE%E0%AA%B2_%E0%AA%B5%E0%AB%8B%E0%AA%B0%E0%AA%BE/%E0%AA%B8%E0%AA%A6%E0%AB%8D_%E0%AA%97%E0%AA%A4_%E0%AA%AA%E0%AA%BF%E0%AA%A4%E0%AA%BE_%E0%AA%AE%E0%AA%BE%E0%AA%9F%E0%AB%87&diff=18753&oldid=prev Atulraval at 00:43, 17 October 2021 2021-10-17T00:43:53Z <p></p> <table style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122;" data-mw="interface"> <col class="diff-marker" /> <col class="diff-content" /> <col class="diff-marker" /> <col class="diff-content" /> <tr class="diff-title" lang="en"> <td colspan="2" style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122; text-align: center;">← Older revision</td> <td colspan="2" style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122; text-align: center;">Revision as of 00:43, 17 October 2021</td> </tr><tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno" id="mw-diff-left-l1">Line 1:</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">Line 1:</td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>{{SetTitle}}</div></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>{{SetTitle}}</div></td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><br></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><br></td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="−"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #ffe49c; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>{{Heading|<del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">સદ્ ગત </del>પિતા માટે| કમલ વોરા}}</div></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; 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border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">&lt;div class="mw-collapsible-content"&gt;</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">{{Poem2Open}}</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">પિતૃપ્રધાન, પિતૃશાસિત પરિવેશમાં બહુધા પુત્રો માતારાગી વિશેષ હોય અને પિતા પ્રત્યે કંઈક સાદર અન્તર રાખતા, ક્યારેક વિદ્રોહવૃત્તિ સેવતા રહે છે. પણ પિતાના વાત્સલ્યનો અનુભવ સ્થિર થયો છે ત્યાં એમની હયાતીમાં અને એમના નિધન બાદ એક સર્જકની અભિવ્યક્તિ કેવું કાવ્યરૂપ લે એનું આ કૃતિ ઊર્મિશીલ ઉદાહરણ છે.</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">રચના, ગદ્યકાવ્યની તરાહમાં એક પણ વિરામચિહ્નના વિનિયોગ વિના પાંત્રીસેક પંક્તિમાં વિલસ્યું છે, ‘ટિક્’ અને ‘અરે’ શબ્દ પાસેના ડૉટ્સના અપવાદ બાદ કરતાં.</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">તાત્પર્ય કે એકીશ્વાસે કૃતિને સળંગ આત્મસાત્ કરવાની છે, અવિરામ, અવિશ્રાન્ત, નાયકને જાણે સદ્ગત પિતાને કૃતિપાઠ અવકાશમાં સંભળાવવો ના હોય. ભાવક માટે તો ખરો પણ આ કૃતિ ‘સદ્ગત પિતા માટે’ ખાસ છે.</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">પિતાને સંબોધીને કવિનાયકે કાવ્યની આકૃતિ કંડારી હોય એવી આ વિરલ વસ છે.</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">પહેલી ચાર લીટીમાં તત્કાલ મરણની અણધારી ઘટના ‘એકાએક સોપો પડી ગયો’ વર્ણનમાં તાદૃશ થઈ છે. પિતાપુત્ર વાતો કરતા હતા અને ‘કોઈ એક ક્ષણ’ એવી આવી કે –</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">‘સરી ગયા તમે ક્ષણ સોંસરવા</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">ક્ષણ પછી ક્ષણ પછી ક્ષણ</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">પછી પછી ક્ષણરહિત સમયમાં</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">કદાચ સમય સોસરવા.’</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">આ ભાવક માટે તો અહીં ક્ષણ–ઉપનિષદ્રનું મિનિચર રૂપ ઊભું થઈ ગયું. આમેય ‘અનેકએક’ સંગ્રહમાં ‘ચાર’માં ખંડે ‘ક્ષણો’ વિશે ચાર રચનાઓ હાજર છે. એમાંય ‘ક્ષણો.. બે’ની પદાવલિમાં ક્ષણ-સમયનું સાહચર્ય ધ્યાનાર્હ છે.</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">ક્ષણ સમય એક અભિન્ન છે…</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">…ક્ષણ નથી સમય છે.</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">સમય નથી ક્ષણ છે…</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">આ ગૂંચમાં વ્યસ્ત છું. (પૃ. ૯૫)</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">આગળ પૃ. ૯૭ પર ગૂંચ જરીક ઉકેલાઈ છે:</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">‘ક્ષણમાં</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">હતું</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">ન હતું થઈ જાય…’</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">સદ્ગત પિતા સંબંધે પણ આવું બની રહ્યું ત્યારે કાવ્યનાયક અવાક્ ઊભો રહી શું જોયા કરે છે?</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">‘શબ્દોને.’</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">જોવાનું–દ્રષ્ટાભાવનું પૂરું થઈ ગયા પછી ધ્વનિનો કોઠો નિરૂપાયો છે: શબ્દોને ઘડિયાળની ટિક.. ટિક…માં ઝૂલતા….ઝિલાતા / વિલાતા /નેત્ર–શ્રુતિનો સંગમ ભાવક માટે અહીં પૂરો થાય ત્યાં તો સમય–રાત્રિની પ્રગાઢ અન્ધકારદશામાં એક જલસિક્ત ગતિશીલ કલ્પન ઝલમલ્યું છે:</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">‘રાત્રિના</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">પ્રગાઢ અંધકારમાં</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">સૂના શાંત સરોવરે</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">આપણે એકમેકના હાથ છોડી દીધા હોય એમ</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">ઝબકી જાઉં છું</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">આમ, છૂટી જતા હશે હાથ?</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">ઓસરી રહેલા વમળના વેગે ધ્રૂજતી</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">હથેળીઓમાં મોં છુપાવી દઉં છું.’</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">સૂના શાંત સરોવર સમી નિદ્રસ્થ સ્થિતિમાં પિતાએ જ નહીં, પુત્રે પણ પિતાનો હાથ છોડી દીધો ને મૃત્યુમહોદધિમાં પિતા ધકેલાઈ ગયા એનો અજ્ઞાત–ચિત્ત–અપરાધ પુત્રમાં રોપાઈ ગયો હશે એટલે નાયક ઓસરી રહેલા વમળના વેગે ‘ધ્રૂજતી હથેળીઓમાં મોં છુપાવી’ દે છે!</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">પોતે હાથ (કાપીને?) છોડાવી દીધા એની વિસ્મિત જાણકારી ‘આમ, છૂટી જતા હશે હાથ?’ પ્રશ્નમાં પુરાઈ છે છતાં પોતે પિતાનો હાથ છોડી દેવાનો નાયકસ્થિત અપરાધ મનોવિજ્ઞાનીઓ જેને ઇન્દ્રો પ્યૂનિટિવ (Punitive) સંકુલ દશા કહે એ પ્રકારનો છે. આવા કલ્પિત ગુનાનું પ્રાયશ્ચિત્ત કવિએ નાયકમાં પૉઝિટિવ વળાંક આપી સિદ્ધ કર્યું છે. (વિશેષમાં, જે હાથે પિતાના હાથ છૂટી ગયા તેને પણ છૂટી જવાના ભયે પુત્રના માથામાં આધાર સાધ્યો છે. તાત્પર્ય કે એક તરફ મરણ છે તો બીજી બાજુ જીવન છે. કહો કે એક અ–ખંડિત માળાના ત્રણ મણકા!) એ અરીસામાં પિતાની ઇમેજને પ્રારોપી પોતાનો ચહેરો પિતાની ચહેરા રેખાઓ સાથે હેળવીભેળવી દે છે. અહીં કૃતિ પૂરી થઈ હોત તો આવી અન્ય પ્રથિત કૃતિઓની પંક્તિમાં બેસી જાત.</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">વ્યષ્ટિની વાતને અહીં સમષ્ટિ–સમય સાથે સંકલિત કરવાનો ઉપક્રમ એક ક્રિએટિવ જંપ જેવો છે.</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">‘સમયનો</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">વિશૃંખલ સૂનકાર</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">શ્વાસમાં, રક્તમાં, છાતીમાં સર…સરતો</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">સાંભળું છું.’</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">આવી ‘ફ્રેગમેન્ટેડ ઍમ્પ્ટીનેસ’ને શ્રુતિગોચર કરવાના સાહસ માટે કવિશ્રી કમલ વોરાને ધન્યવાદ…અને અંત તો, ગદ્યકાવ્યમાં ઓપે એવો કથાત્મક પણ છે: ‘યુવા પુત્રના માથામાં હાથ ફેરવતો દાદાજીની વારતા માંડું છું’ – પુત્રનો સ્વૈચ્છિક પિતૃકાયાપ્રવેશ જેટલો ભાવનામય છે એટલો જ વાસ્તવ પ્રતીતિભર્યો છે.</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">(૨)</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">જિજ્ઞાસુ ભાવકને વિલિયમ બ્લૅકની પંક્તિઓમાં આલેખાયેલી પુત્રની દારુણ મનોદશા અર્પું?</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">My mother groaned, my father wept,</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">into the dangerous world I leapt;</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">Helpless, naked, piping loud, Like a</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">fiend hid in a cloud.</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">(‘Infant Sorrow’)</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">{{Right|(રચનાને રસ્તે)}}</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">{{Poem2Close}}</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</ins></div></td></tr> </table> Atulraval https://wiki.ekatrafoundation.org/index.php?title=%E0%AA%85%E0%AA%B0%E0%AB%8D%E0%AA%B5%E0%AA%BE%E0%AA%9A%E0%AB%80%E0%AA%A8_%E0%AA%97%E0%AB%81%E0%AA%9C%E0%AA%B0%E0%AA%BE%E0%AA%A4%E0%AB%80_%E0%AA%95%E0%AA%BE%E0%AA%B5%E0%AB%8D%E0%AA%AF%E0%AA%B8%E0%AA%82%E0%AA%AA%E0%AA%A6%E0%AA%BE/%E0%AA%95%E0%AA%AE%E0%AA%B2_%E0%AA%B5%E0%AB%8B%E0%AA%B0%E0%AA%BE/%E0%AA%B8%E0%AA%A6%E0%AB%8D_%E0%AA%97%E0%AA%A4_%E0%AA%AA%E0%AA%BF%E0%AA%A4%E0%AA%BE_%E0%AA%AE%E0%AA%BE%E0%AA%9F%E0%AB%87&diff=10299&oldid=prev MeghaBhavsar: Created page with "{{SetTitle}} {{Heading|સદ્ ગત પિતા માટે| કમલ વોરા}} <poem> હજુ હમણાં તો આપણે વાતો કરતા હ..." 2021-07-20T11:19:40Z <p>Created page with &quot;{{SetTitle}} {{Heading|સદ્ ગત પિતા માટે| કમલ વોરા}} &lt;poem&gt; હજુ હમણાં તો આપણે વાતો કરતા હ...&quot;</p> <p><b>New page</b></p><div>{{SetTitle}}<br /> <br /> {{Heading|સદ્ ગત પિતા માટે| કમલ વોરા}}<br /> &lt;poem&gt;<br /> હજુ હમણાં તો<br /> આપણે વાતો કરતા હતા<br /> ને એકાએક સોપો પડી ગયો<br /> કોઈ એક ક્ષણે<br /> સરી ગયા તમે ક્ષણ સો ંસ ર વ ા<br /> ક્ષણ પછી ક્ષણ પછી ક્ષણ<br /> પછી પછી ક્ષણરહિત સમયમાં<br /> કદાચ સમય સોંસરવા<br /> હું અવાક્ ઊભો જોઈ રહું છું<br /> શબ્દોને<br /> ઘડિયાળની ટિક્...ટિક્...માં ઝૂલતા...ઝિલતા<br /> વિલાતા<br /> રાત્રિના<br /> પ્રગાઢ અંધકારમાં<br /> સૂના, શાંત સરોવરે<br /> આપણે એકમેકના હાથ છોડી દીધા હોય એમ<br /> ઝબકી જાઉં છું<br /> આમ, છૂટી જતા હશે હાથ?!<br /> ઓસરી રહેલા વમળના વેગે ધ્રૂજતી<br /> હથેળીઓમાં<br /> મોં છુપાવી દઉં છું<br /> હમણાં હમણાં<br /> અરીસામાં જોઉં છું તો<br /> હોઠોનો મરોડ<br /> નાકનો ઘાટ<br /> અરે... ચહેરાની એખ એક રેખા<br /> તમારા ચહેરાને મળતી આવે છે<br /> સમયનો<br /> વિશૃંખલ સૂનકાર<br /> શ્વાસમાં, રક્તમાં, છાતીમાં સર...સરતો<br /> સાંભળું છું<br /> સાંજની સૂન વેળાએ<br /> યુવા પુત્રના<br /> માથામાં હાથ ફેરવતો<br /> દાદાજીની વારતા માંડું છું.<br /> &lt;/poem&gt;</div> MeghaBhavsar